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Av lily + zee - 12 juni 2015 15:08

 

"Effy;"


one of the best in this business, top of the board of "assassins", companied by Alexandra as her partner. Effy, a young intelligent individual, started young with her training and is now playing for the big league. There is nothing she won't be able to do, no challenges or people she can't take. Place her in restrains with a room full of 10 enemies and she will be last one standing, you wouldn't want to be the one standing on the wrong side of the blade. Her rank is high. Aside all of the business Effy is a very desired assassin, not only for her skills - also for her looks. She is very beautiful with her big blue eyes, and is always wanted.

Effy is constantly put in missions with (partner) to take out multiple gangs, all of which are of males. They will win each time. What happens when the girls are given a undercover job with the most dangerous criminals of that business? And then find out these guys have more under their piles of money but their looks? Love can be dangerous.

// lovi


Av lily + zee - 8 december 2014 14:23



I was laying down on my, well bed is what they call it. I was looking up at the sky, the stars looked bigger than ever and the moon looked so close that you could almost grab it. I closed my eyes and slowly drifted away to the world were the dreams lay.

I opened my eyes but everything was dark. I tried so hard to see around me but it was impossible for me to see anything, all I could hear was the sounds around me. I heard some sort of growling around me. I felt my heart beating faster and faster by the minute and the sounds kept coming closer and closer, my breathing got harder since every time I tried to breath I struggled. It took all the energy I had to breath easily.

All of a sudden I felt this horrible pain in my chest like if someone or something impaled me, I touched my chest but I couldn't feel anything but the pain was still there. I could feel my breathing slowly stopping and again I started to close my eyes, the last thing I could hear was:
'Wicked is good?'

I opened my eyes as I sat up breathing heavily. I ran my hands through my hair as I looked around making sure I wasn't still dreaming but luckily I wasn't. My eyes got caught on well, I call her Blondie and Newt. They were walking towards the Maze as they were talking. I thought they looked cute together but instead of going over to them I just laid back down and sigh as I looked at my hands thinking about my dream. I was deep in my thought when a loud and terrifying scream made me jump up from my bed, I looked around to see where the scream came from as my eyes stopped on Thomas running out from the wood with another glader running right behind him, all of the sudden the other glader jumped on Thomas and I started running towards them. Everyone else were there too, Minho and Alby tried to stop him.

"What the hell is going on, who is that?", I asked Chuck that was standing beside me, he looked straight at me with his big eyes.

"It's Ben, and he just attacked Thomas", he whispered as I raised my eyebrows at him.

"Why? What the hell is wrong with him?", I whispered back as I looked back up to see 'blondie' and Newt running towards us, I grabbed her hand before she could go any further.

"What is going on?", she asked trying to make the scene. Alby had reported Ben to prison for now, so he could figure out why this had happened.

"Ben attacked Thomas..", I started but couldn't quite finish as our attention turned to Thomas again.

All of sudden 'Blondie' let go of my hand as she hinted me towards him, I gave her a confused look as I turned around and saw him running towards the outlook point, for me it looked more of a treehouse but whatever.

I walked slowly towards the ladder as I grabbed it and I climbed up, I opened the little door as I was on top, I got up and I could feel Thomas staring at me probably confused why I was there.

"Hi..", I said awkwardly as I looked up to meet his puppy looking hazel brown eyes, a little smile spread across my lips as I looked at him.

"Hey, what are you doing here?", he asked as he ran his hand through his hair.

"Just wanted to check if you were alright", I said as I sat with my arms crossed.

"Thanks." He said shortly and looked up as he gave me a small smile.

"So, why did he attack you?", I asked with big eyes and stared at him, he chuckled as he looked up straight into my eyes.

"I think he was stung", he answered as I raised my eyebrows at him and bite my lip.

"Stung? By what? A bee or something?", I asked as I chuckled a bit at the last guess.

"What a bee? No, by a griever", I gasped slightly, as I breathed out.

"What the hell is a griever?", I said as I sat a bit closer to him, he looked up as he smiled slightly.

"Well, no one really knows but they say that Grievers are very dangerous and once you get stung by them you can have trouble breathing, when you get stung it feels like you've been impaled and you can black out but when you wake up, you're completely different and you're very aggressive as you saw out there with Ben. But you can't feel it if you run your hand on the spot you've been impaled, you can only feel it inside. After that, you die", I just stared at him with big eyes as I gasped, that's exactly what happened to me in my dream.

I could feel my hands shaking as my eyes got a bit watery, he looked up and looked at me with a shocked expression.

"Don't be scared, that only happens if you spend a night in the maze", he thought I was scared but I wasn't, well I was a bit. Why did I dream that?

"It's not that", I mumbled as I shook my head while tears fell down my cheeks.

"Then what is it?", he said as he slowly grabbed my hands looking me in the eyes.

"The exact thing happened to me, in my dream last night. I dreamt that I got impaled by a griever and I couldn't breath or move and everything was so dark. I don't know why I dreamt that, I've never been in the maze and I haven't seen any grievers. And then at the end I heard a voice saying... 'Wicked is good'", I said as I looked in his eyes still shaking. All of sudden he embraced me in a hug that was so unexpected that I was just still like a doll, but I slowly wrapped my tiny arms around him.

"I've almost had the same dream, well not really because the only thing from my dream that was like yours was the voice saying 'Wicked is good' ", he said as he slowly lets go of me and looks in my eyes.

"What's does it mean?", I asked as I looked down, I wiped away my tears and looked back up at him.

"I don't know, but I promise I'm gonna figure it out", he answered and smiled.

"Thanks", I said and smiled back, I stood up to get down and again go back to the others.

"Um, can we just keep this between us for a while?", he asked as I turned around.

"Sure, and let's just say you never saw me crying", I smirked as he raised an eyebrow.

"Alright, then I've never seen a tear leave those beautiful eyes", he agreed and smirked, I just shook my head slightly smiling and left.


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So here is chapter 4 and I hope you guys will like it and sorry for the wait, it's just that me and Lovi have been very busy with school and other stuff. But hopefully we are gonna get better at posting. But for now enjoy:)

~Sara

Av lily + zee - 16 november 2014 14:58


I laid back onto the so called bed with my arms supporting my head under the pillow. I was in deep thought, barely noticing what was going on around me. Every little sound was blocked out by another thought or idea of how this place was built out. Where was this 'glade' anyways? For all I know we could be somewhere across the Pacific Ocean on a small island or something.

But the thing was, I didn't really care, and that was what frightened me. This place was strangely attracting, I had no idea where we were settled but at the same time I felt safe. Here I could sort of get a new start, a new life. I mean who wouldn't want a blank slate in life and just start over?

I rolled onto my back, shifting rather uncomfortably as I took in a deep breath. What I had learnt today was that those huge walls hade a sort of opening that closed each night and opened at first light in the mornings. It was strange, but it was as if something outside of those walls was calling for me, pocking for my attention. I just didn't know what ? yet. But I was determined to find out, one way or another.


The morning after I got awoken by someone shaking me roughly, not bothering the fact that I was a lady.

"Get ya bum up love, need to show ya somethin'", a deep British accent spoke, bringing me out of my dream state.

Tiredly I rubbed my eyes lightly, after that I got up, following the male in front of me. My gaze rested upon his strong back muscles, I was barely able to focus on where we were going as I couldn't look at anything else then Newt.

The blonde guy stopped just in front of one of the huge stone walls, a thick green ivy climbing up the wall over the top. A nervous feeling built up inside of me, it wasn't that I was scared; no more like the opposite. Newt turned his figure toward the wall, grabbing onto the ivy and pulling it aside slightly just to reveal a small square, meaning to be a window.

"What's this?", I asked a hint of tension in my voice. My eyes was glued to the darkness underneath the surface, but at the edge of my look I could see his eyes darted over from the window to me. A small smile laid upon his lips.

"We want ya to see the real.. thing", he answered slightly amused when I saw what was hiding in the corners. The creature was viscous, disturbing and made my insides hurt. Half-rotten flesh, half-machine and the sight made me feel sick. The thing turned our way, as if it saw us with no eyes and jumped onto the window but it didn't make a difference. Newt let go of the ivy again, making it fall back to it's place as he faced the wall.

"What the hell was that thing?", I questioned, barely able to stand properly. It had shaken me up more then what I thought it would. Somehow, I still needed to get out there.

"That, is why we don't go out there", he pointed toward the opening. Newt knew what I had been thinking of.

"How-..?", my words got interrupted when we all heard a scream from the other side of the glade. It was Thomas, something had happened. We exchanged a look, hurried over there and saw Ben, another Glader fighting his way through the teenagers.

I ended up next to Aurora, she grabbed onto my hand, as if to keep me from going any more forward.

"What is going on?", I asked trying to make the scene. Alby had gotten there and had reported Ben to prison for now, so he could figure out why this had happened.

"Ben attacked Thomas..", Aurora started but couldn't quite finish as our attention turned to Thomas again. I let go of Auroras hand and waved her off toward him, since I knew they had some sort of connection going on. I decided to go investigate instead, trying to avoid the looks I received from the bunch.

With light steps I made my way toward the custody, where Ben was held just to get stopped by one of the gladers, the guard I presume.

"She's good, let her through", said one of the others, I recognised him as one of the runners - Minho, I believe.

"What happened exactly?", I asked once I arrived, Minho looked at me, a smile coming onto his lips.

"Ben here, got stung", he answered calmly without letting out too much information. I nodded, slowly taking in the poor boy in the cage. He was drained, completely out of it. He looked almost dead, weird enough I had seen that before but I couldn't make out from where.

"Tell me Princess, would you like to see something cool?", he asked with a secretive tone. I scoffed and raised my eyebrow.

"Princess?", I questioned and he let out a chuckle.

"Since we don't know your name I thought..", he explained and I nodded with a smile.

"It's fine, what did you want to show me?", I asked once again as his face lit up into a smile. He looked around so no one else was around to see as he grabbed my arm and yanked me into a different direction.

Once we stopped a few feet into the forest, my sight met a smaller hay house of some sort. Minho led me through the opening, just to reveal a huge table with a model of what seemed to be the maze itself. Every little detail was pointed out, it was beautifully made.

"Wow", I exhaled and stared at the thing in amazement just as someone else walked through the door.

"What the bloody hell is she doin' here?", Newt bulked and cast a look my way, his arms tensed up into fists. I stared at him with shock, this couldn't be good.

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Neeeext chapter, sorry for the long wait but I've been so busy the last couple of days. And now I'm sick as well, but hey I managed to do a thing at least, I hope you're not too disappointed.

x lovi

Av lily + zee - 26 oktober 2014 02:05



I was focusing to see where I was but the thick darkness around me gave me a hard time seeing anything, I took a deep breath to see a glimpse of something but it was impossible. I could only hear loud noises, it's sounded like an elevator. I tried to stay sane for the moment because that's all I could do.

All of sudden I felt shifting next to me, like if something just moved. I stayed quiet to at least hear what it was, what if it was something dangerous? I didn't remember anything of how I got here or how it happened. The only thing I remember was my name. Aurora, that bugged me why couldn't I remember anything? That made me so frustrated that I let out a groan.

"Hello?", I heard a weak girls voice next to me, at least now I know it's a girl beside me.

"Who's there?", I said defensively, trying not to sound scared or worried. When I moved I felt a horrible pain on my side but I didn't let out a single noise.

"I-I don't know my name, in fact I barely know anything about me or where I am..", the girl started again, she sounded a bit scared or actually sad. But I understand where she was coming from since I don't remember anything either.

"All I know is.. that my names' Aurora", I answered and I tried to sit up. I managed to sit with my head in my hands trying to figure out how long we've been in this thing. Probably a while, 20 minutes at least.

We sat there in silence for some more minutes, I was about to say something to the girl next to me when the elevator stopped and I heard a loud alarming sound as if the elevator was telling someone we were here. Wherever here was.

Both me and the girl next to me gasped, we were stunned by the sudden stop and loud noise. I was about to stand up when door above us opened and revealed blue sky as the warm sun light hit my face. I covered my face with my hand because after not seeing anything but darkness it hurts to have that much light in your face. I removed my hands and looked up and looked at the crowd above me with a squinted eye. I just realised they were all boys.

"There's two people down there! And they're girls", said one of them with a surprised tone. Why was he surprised that it was two girls? I looked up and now I could see clearly with two eyes.

"Get 'em up here, will ya shank?", answered another with what sounded like a British accent. Murmurs went through the air nonstop as a rope was tossed down to the both of us. I sent a look to the other girls way, as to see if I should go up or not.

She nodded and I grabbed the rope, easily climbing up but then a pair of strong arms helped me up. As I stood up my eyes locked with this boy with hazel brown eyes and tousled brown hair, I looked away as I looked at the other girl.

"What's your name?", I heard a guy ask the other girl not bothering the multiple guys around us.

"I don't know..", she mumbled as my hand grabbed onto hers making sure she wasn't scared. The male nodded, turning to me.

"You?", he asked and looked over at another guy.

"Aurora", I answered as the guy nodded once again turning to a blonde guy who was kind of cute to be honest and I saw him whisper something to him, but there was something that was bothering me. All the guys around us gave me and the other girl some bad looks as if they were some wild predators and we were the food.

"Thomas", the guy who seemed like the leader said, searching through the crowd for a certain guy, the one he was looking for stepped forward, his eyes glued onto me. It was the guy that helped me up earlier.

"Yes, Alby?", the brown headed boy answered, almost out of breath. Alby seemed to be the leader, he was a muscular brown guy with big brown eyes, kind of attractive.

"Would you get these ladies to the Med?", he asked, but it was more of a request that couldn't be turned down. Thomas nodded, walking over to us and hinting us toward a smaller building built out of tree and hay. We followed him, having no idea of what was going on.

"Where are we?", I suddenly heard the other girls voice ask Thomas. Thomas just let out a somewhat of a chuckle. Why did he find this place funny? Because to be fully honest I didn't find it any sort of way funny. I found this place pretty creepy and scary. There were big walls all around us as if we didn't have a way out. Like were trapped here.

"This is the glade", he answered with ease, knowing exactly what to say. He then stopped outside the door of the house and opened it, waving us inside.

"Why are we here?", the girl asked, I felt a sudden sadness in her voice which I surprisingly didn't have. I just stood quietly next to her, with my arms crossed over my chest as my eyes were resting on Thomas' figure.

"For new beginnings", Thomas smiled and placed his eyes on the girl for a while before he looked at me with a certain look forming on his face, I look I couldn't exactly read.

"What the hell?", the girl muttered as Thomas had left. I just simply shrugged my shoulders and just like that the door opened once again, but this time it was the blonde guy. What now? Can't we two girls have a bit alone time to process this mess?

"Gals, Alby needs ya back at the box, rather hurriedly", he said in a British accent. He disappeared out the door as fast as he came in, leaving us in a dead silence. We hurried outside and went back the way we came, stopping by Alby.

"What's this?", Alby asked his voice demanding and powerful. He held up a small bag, containing some sort of bottles and a note. The other girl walked closer and grabbed the note, reading it.

This will be needed - WICKED IS GOOD'.

I raised my eyebrows as I looked at the note and then back at the girl as the guys formed a circle around us.

"I swear, I have no clue what this means", The girl started and looked over at me.

"I can't remember anything but my name", I said defensively because I didn't want these guys to think I was weak as Alby nodded as a response.

"Newt, what'cha think?", Alby asked the blonde british guy. I guess I learned his name now too, Newt. It was an odd name but it sounded a bit funny.

"If she knew something she'd better bloody tell us by now", he answered and Alby nodded. Suddenly Thomas came running from behind us.

"Alby, Minho's back!", he shouted from a while back. Alby and Newt exchanged a look and hurried after Thomas. Something inside told me to follow them so I did. What was happening now?

I stopped right next to Thomas as I looked at the guy who probably was Minho. Minho was really really attractive, tall with brown hair and a very muscular body. He was that kind of attractive that if you see him once you want to kiss him all over his face.

"They got him..- I managed to escape just in time", Minho talked fast snapping me back to reality he sounded out of breath from running. Wait, what the hell was he talking about?

"Wait, who the fuck are 'they'?", I asked a bit angry. I'm done with these boys talking so weird and not telling us everything. And all of sudden I felt everyone's eyes on me but mine were glued to Minho's as he stared straight at me making me feel a bit embarrassed.

"We'll tell you everything later but for now, Chuck show the girls to their beds", said Alby as this cute little chubby boy who was around the age of 13 stepped forward smiling widely toward us.

We walked quietly behind Chuck like we did with Thomas earlier, we stopped as he showed us our 'beds'.

"Are you serious? Are we really gonna sleep on these waving things you call beds?" I said as I shook my head.

"I'm sorry, we didn't know girls with high expectations would come here", he answered as he chuckled and walked away.

What the hell is wrong with the people here?

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Sorry for this short and bad chapter it's just that my imagination sucks at night so I'm sorry, but hopefully my next chapter will be better. But chapter 3 from lovi will probably be better so look forward to that:)

~Sara

Av lily + zee - 19 oktober 2014 20:44

The darkness laid thick around me, my head was pounding horribly. I could barely breath, the pain in my chest made me feel helpless and nonfunctional for all and everything.

I rolled over on the metallic surface, my hearing was blocked out by the sound of the moving object underneath my body. I believed I was in a room of some sort, a moving one, probably a elevator. I wondered where about I was just as I heard a groan next to me, there was another girl here.

"Hello?", I tried but my voice was barely loud enough for anyone to hear. I cursed under my breath as I tried once again to get up.

"Who's there?", said the girl defensively, her voice carried her words in a way mine couldn't, she must have been passed out before this too. That's when I realised I didn't know who I was. The sounds from the girl informed me she was moving but was also hurt, she might have gotten hurt before waking up here, I felt her pain, and confusion.

"I-I don't know my name, in fact I barely know anything about me or where I am..", I started feeling the tears forming in my eyes as I couldn't remember anything.

"All I know is.. that my names' Aurora", she answered with the same tone as I, which meant she didn't remember anything either.

I took in another breath, this time easier as the pain in my chest had relieved slightly as I had sat straight against the cold wall. I knew we must have been in this box for a while, I was smart enough to count there had been at least 20 minutes since I first woke up from the pain. Shockingly I had no memory of how I got in here, or anything really. It's all just, gone.

I sat there in silence for another few minutes, but just as I was about to pass out once again the elevator stopped and a deafening sound shot through the air, like an alarm, to inform someway that this box had reached it's destination to someone, or something, on the other side.

Both me and Aurora gasped, stunned by the sudden change of light as the heavy doors above us opened up, revealing a blue cloud-free sky. With the use of my right hand I sealed myself from the light and after a while I finally managed to see somewhat of the new environment above me. That was until a load of interested eyes and body's that they belonged to blocked the view, something caught my attention, they were all boys.

"There's two people down there! And they're girls", said one of them with a surprised tone.

"Get 'em up here, will ya shank?", answered another with an British accent. Murmurs went through the air nonstop as a rope was tossed down to the both of us. Aurora sent a look my way, as to see if she should go up or not. I nodded and got up myself, grabbing onto the wall of the box. I followed her movements as she climbed up the rope, suddenly another rope was tossed down, for me.

I walked over and grabbed it, steadily in both of my hands as I brushed my blonde hair out of my face. I copied off Auroras moves while climbing up and found it surprisingly easy, as I had done it before but I could not remember where. That bugged me.

Just as I got up and grabbed onto the ledge a pair of strong arms grabbed onto mine and lifted me out of the hole, with seemingly not much struggle. As I finally stood on my own feet, the long green grass brushing my fingertips, I had to look into the eyes of my helper.

"What's your name?", he asked not bothering the multiple guys around me and the other girl.

"I don't know..", I mumbled and felt Auroras hand grab onto mine, it was a comfort and for some reason it felt very safe. The male nodded, turning to Aurora.

"You?", he asked and looked over at another guy.

"Aurora", she answered, the male nodded once again and turned to the other guy, a blonde very attractive male and whispered something to him. I couldn't help but notice the looks both me and Aurora received from the group of the boys around us, like they hadn't eaten any food in several months and we were the meat.

"Thomas", the guy who seemed like the leader said, searching through the crowd for a certain guy, the one he was looking for stepped forward, his eyes glued onto Aurora.

"Yes, Alby?", the brown headed boy answered, almost out of breath.

"Would you get these ladies to the Med?", he asked, but it was more of a request that couldn't be turned down. Thomas nodded, walking over to us and hinting us toward a smaller building built out of tree and hay. We followed him, having no idea of what was going on.

"Where are we?", I suddenly spit out, barely ready for the question myself. Thomas didn't stop nor did he even flinch, instead he let out a somewhat of a chuckle. How did he find this place funny?

"This is the glade", he answered with ease, knowing exactly what to say. He then stopped outside the door of the house and opened it, waving us inside.

"Why are we here?", I asked again, feeling a strong sadness from this place. Aurora stood quietly next to me, her arms crossed over her chest and her eyes resting on Thomas' figure.

"For new beginnings", Thomas smiled and placed his eyes on mine for a while before he looked at Aurora with a certain look forming on his face.

"What the hell?", I muttered as Thomas had left. Aurora shrugged her shoulders and just like that the door opened once again, but this time it was the blonde guy.

"Gals, Alby needs ya back at the box, rather hurriedly", he said, his British accent stunning me for a moment. He seemed to be the other leader around here. He disappeared out the door as fast as he came in, leaving us in a dead silence. We hurried outside and went back the way we came, stopping by Alby.

"What's this?", Alby asked his voice demanding and powerful. He held up a small bag, containing some sort of bottles and a note. I walked closer and grabbed the note, reading it.

'This will be needed - WICKED IS GOOD'.

My body repelled slightly as I read the words, what does that mean? Aurora looked at the note then at me and the others around the formed circle.

"I swear, I have no clue what this means", I started and looked over at Aurora.

"I can't remember anything but my name", she said defensively and Alby nodded as a response.

"Newt, what'cha think?", Alby asked the blonde british guy. Something started up inside of me, like a feeling, Newt.

"If she knew something she'd better bloody tell us by now", he answered and Alby nodded. Suddenly Thomas came running from behind us.

"Alby, Minho's back!", he shouted from a while back. Alby and Newt exchanged a look and hurried after Thomas. Aurora followed them and I went off after them as well, what was happening now? This situation just couldn't become any more fucked up, right?

I caught up to the strangers that stood in a circle around another guy, who I believed was Minho.

"They got him, I managed to escape just in time", Minho talked fast, out of breath from running. Who the hell were 'they'?

That was when I actually looked around me for the first time, all I could see was a big wall reaching up to the sky, with a enormous opening on each corner, like east, west, south and the one we were at now, north. The place we were settled in, The Glade, was surrounded by huge walls.. in other words, we were trapped.

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That's the beginning of our new novel, hope you like it! Comment, like?

x lovi

Av lily + zee - 4 september 2014 19:19

I woke up the next morning, sweat building up around the collar of my nightgown. Rolling out of my sheets I opened my eyes, almost out of breath from the dreams I had last night. I pull my hands through my thick hair, my elbows resting on my knees. I took a deep breath and tilted my head up to look out the window, the sun was shining and the sky was blue; it'll be a good day for choosing factions.

I brushed my blonde locks out of my eyes as I walked up to the line of folks, waiting to get let into the building. A nervous feeling was nagging down inside of me, in only a matter of moments I would be somewhere else; I would be someone else. I looked around, noticing the same guy from yesterday standing in the line further away from me, he was smiling at me. This made me smile back and look away, this time I met a young girls gaze; I saw her yesterday too. She smiled at me and I smiled back.

By the time when we finally got let into the building everyone was talking in low voices; murmuring and whispering to each other about the factions. The ceremony started and we all took our places, me sitting down beside my father by the stiffs.

A bunch of people's names got called up, after a while it was the boys' turn, who was named Caleb. A small smile spread across my face once I heard his name, he walked up to the table and chose his faction. I was to busy thinking about what to do when my name got called, me giving the room a dreadful look, I wasn't ready for this. And the whole part about me being a Divergent, how was that going to turn out?

I swallowed my words and thoughts as I hugged my fathers hand before leaving his side in the line of chairs. I stood up, everyone's eyes on me. Heat covered my face slightly, like I was ashamed for being different. I took a shaky breath, to try a sooth myself even just for a brief moment. Soon enough I stood on the stage, light surrounding me and the bowls in front of me. For a while I just stood there, but then I grabbed the knife, slicing it through my skin and letting a drop of blood build up and fall into the Dauntless bowl. Fire embraced the thick liquid and a frying sound was heard before all of the Dauntless people started applauding and screaming for their new member; me.

It was rarely that 'Stiffs' became Dauntless, because well they're pretty much the opposites of each other. And I was so ready for that change. But one thing that peeked my interest was the girl that I saw outside, she also chose to join the Dauntless. A smile spread across my face as everyone was set to leave, all of us started running and I followed the stream; knowing the Dauntless had something good but dangerous planned out for us as a first test. I ran so fast my legs almost started aching as I arrived at the destination set, we stopped underneath the railway for the train that took you all the way from the city to the edge. Most of the people around me, not many newcomers, started climbing up the rails and before I had the time to react someone grabbed onto my arm, pulling me along.

"C'mon, we can't let them down!", a girls voice rang in my ear, looking beside me I saw a brunette pale girl.

"Wait, are we supposed to climb up there?", I questioned feeling me being afraid of heights wasn't too good now. She turned to me, a sort of fire sparkling in her eyes.

"Yes! Now hurry!", she squealed a bit hurriedly like we were late for something. I nodded and pulled my courage together as I ran over to one of the poles and started climbing up. After a few struggling seconds I finally got up, seeing everyone stood there; waiting for something. The girl was fast at my side and she looked around, a wide smile playing on her lips as she saw and heard something in the distance. I jerked my head to the side to be surprised by the train, no, no wait they couldn't mean..?

"Hurry Stiffs!", said one of the black / red dressed males and pulled us along as the train rushed beside us, making my hair fly all directions. Everyone started jumping on as it soon was my turn, I managed to jump on with my skin intact.

I slid down onto the floor, almost out of breath as I rushed a hand through my blonde hair. The girl sat down beside me, she seemed to be used to adventure.

"I'm Raven", she greeted and grabbed my hand.

"Valentina", I smiled. She nodded all of a sudden the doors opened up, by one of the Dauntless. I stood up, curious to what was going on. To my surprise I saw people starting to jump from the train to a rooftop building. I gasped and turned around.

"They're jumping!", Raven flew up beside me, a chocked expression on her face but she looked at me again.

"Then what are we waiting for?", she smiled and I nodded, a slight fear in my stomach. But I knew I had to do everything I needed to.

We took each other's hands, a sort of electric feeling going through them as we jumped and landed on the stony ground. We rolled onto our backs but fast got up again as everyone gathered by the edge. I got up and went over there, seeing a guy with blonde hair, piercings and a couple of tattoos stepping in front of us.

"I'm Eric, I'm going to be one of your leaders here in Dauntless. This is the entrance, the only one in, now we need one of you to jump first", he informed and looked around while he said it to see if anyone caught onto the jumping part.

"What's down there?", someone asked with a slight worried tone.

"You'll just have to see for yourself. One of you have to be the first, now who is it going to be?", he asked again everyone looking around at each other. I felt some sort of courage building up inside of me and before I had the thought of it I spoke up.

"I am", I decided and stepped forward, a murmur going through the crowd. Eric looked at me with a slight glimpse of impression in his eyes. He nodded and gestured toward the edge. I went toward it and looked over to Raven, she smiled at me, her face pale of fright for me. I smiled back and turned back toward the whole in front of me, taking off my jacket and throwing it beside me. I also pulled out the band from my hair, leaving it hanging by my back.

"Today stiff", someone commented, making me slightly pissed off.

"Here goes nothing..", I mumbled for myself before letting go and jumping into nothingness.

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Here's the next chapter, sorry it took a really long while but I've been busy with school.

Hope you enjoy.

x lovi.

Av lily + zee - 30 augusti 2014 13:42

Today was the day I was going to do the test, the test that will tell me in what faction I belong in. The test that will change my future... I was standing infront of my mirror watching my reflection carefully. Carefully because us 'stiffs' cant look into the mirror for too long which is a struggle for me since I love to look at myself. I took my comb with a little rose on it as I started to brush my long dark brown hair, I fixed my white and little dusty dress as I just smiled at my reflection for the second time.

"That's enough Raven", my mom said as she closed the mirror and turned me to face her flawless face, and when I say flawless I mean it. There is no flaws on my moms face. Just like me.

"Sorry", I said with a slight smile as she hugged me and kissed my cheek.

"Don't worry sweetheart, and by the way you look really beautiful", she said as she smiled brightly at me taking my breath away. Everyone including me knew that I got all my beauty from my mom.

"Thanks, I just wish dad was here...", I mumbled quietly but not quiet enough since my mom heard, I didn't look up to meet her gaze but I could see her body stiffen. I just sighed and hugged her, I felt her hand stroking my hair gently.

"Good luck, and remember no matter what you choose I will always love you and support you", I smiled and kissed her cheek as I walked out the door.

As I was walking towards the
"faction test building" I was playing with my hands to leave some nervousness.

As I was standing for my turn I noticed a girl a bit taller than me with blonde hair smiling at me as I smiled back, I didn't notice her at first since I was all into my own thoughts. I hope this all goes well or else I don't know what'll I'll do.

I waited almost an hour when the blonde girl came out of the room, she had a shock and confused look on her face but I didn't have the chance to ask since I had to get into the room.

"Hi, I'm tori and I'm gonna tell you in what faction you belong in based on how you deal with this all", the woman said hurriedly. I just nodded and laid down on the chair my head was tilted backwards a bit.

"Here drink this", she said giving me a small glass of blue liquid in it, it's looked strange.

"What is this?", I asked as I took it and looked at it but she just looked at me and nod as in I should just drink it which I did. As I was sitting on the chair I felt myself drifting away.

I opened my eyes to realize I'm in a tiny dark space, I couldn't move and I couldn't see anything. I felt myself panicking since I'm claustrophobic and the worst scenario for me is to get trapped in a small area which I now have. I couldn't breath and I couldn't see anything or hear anything, it was a scary silence.

"HELP!! PLEASE GET ME OUT OF HERE!", I screamed at the top of my lungs, I looked around as I tried to move as I lifted my leg I hit the ceiling and I just stopped screaming and looked at the crack I just made.

"This isn't real..." I kicked more and more until I was thrown out of the box and as I opened my eyes once again I was standing on a small trial in the air. It was like a little bridge between nothing and nothing. It didn't have a beginning nor an end. I looked down as I took a deep breath and then breathed out and closed my eyes.

"This isn't real..." I closed my eyes and let myself fall, I could feel the air running through my hair but I didn't open my eyes until I felt water embrace my body. I opened my eyes once again to realize I was at the depths of the dark ocean. I tried to swim up to the surface but I realized my hands and legs were cuffed and like if that wasn't enough I could see a big white shark swimming towards me at full speed, I started panicking and tried to move but it was useless.

"THIS ISNT REAL!" I screamed as I closed my eyes, water streaming into my lungs.

I gasped for air as I opened my eyes to see the "faction room" and Tori standing beside me with a terrified look on her face, what's going on?

"This isn't possible.., i-it can't be...", I heard her mumble as she bit her lip looking around nervously.

"What's going on? What did I do?" I asked as I sat up from the
chair and walked towards her.

"You need to go, now", she said as she tried to push me out.

"What did I get?", I asked as I struggled against her, she paused and looked at me with a nervous look.

"D-dauntless", she said with an uncertain tone as I breathed out and just slowly opened the door to walk out. As I was about to walk out I heard her mumble something.

"Two divergents? It's impossible...", she muttered as I walked out with the word Divergent in my head. What is a divergent?

I was just sitting on my bed looking around the room fumbling with my hands, what the hell is a divergent? I needed to know.

"Hey hun, how did the test go?", my mom asked as she sat down on the bed smiling at me.

"Ok. I guess...", I said and smiled back she hugged me and smiled at me again.

"Whatever you got I will always support you, you'll always be my baby girl", she said as I smiled at her and hugged her tightly.

"I love you mom..", I mumbled against her beautiful hazel brown hair that smelled like flowers.

"Love you too baby", she said as she kissed my cheek and walked out.

I laid down on my bed ready for sleep, this day has been a very long and weird day. I had all different thoughts going through my mind, and I didn't know how tomorrow would go.

What was a divergent?

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And that was my chapter 2, sorry you had to wait and I hope you'll love it<3

~Sara xx

Av lily + zee - 26 augusti 2014 19:02


Raven Saphira Davenport


Raven Davenport, the girl with the look of an innocent and personality of a stone cold fighter. Raven is a nice and caring girl, she loves to help people in need and she will do anything to protect her loved ones. She hates seeing people get hurt, she doesn't like to see people broken and helpless. Thats why she would do anything to help people as much as she can. Raven hates to feel helpless and useless, she always have to do something to make the time pass. Raven has a passion for music, she loves to sing. She got a beautiful voice, it suits her appearance and her personality.

When the year has come for Raven to choose a faction, where she is to spend the rest of her life, the test doesn't work on her. For some reason the test shows all of the factions on her, which is nearly impossible and very rare, she is divergent.

Raven and Valentina meet for the first time inside of the faction, they instantly realize they have some sort of connection to one another. They decide to research it, when they find out what it is it's far greater then what they could of ever imagined. And now, when they know the truth; there are people out there who wants them killed, or to use them.

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So this was my personal description, I hope u liked it. And I hope u like lovi's chapter 1 and chapter 2 will be up tomorrow?

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